...有的没的都改一下吧，人生就像马拉松不同的人对人
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人生没有终点,需要我们不断前行,也许前行的路不是那么畅通无阻,但是我们会用我们健康的体力,高强的能力,坚强的毅力,去参加人生中的每一场比赛,相信我们会为我们的人生跑出好成绩,加油!
类似问题
类似问题1：求大神帮我修改一下这篇作文Is it worthwhile for everyone to learn English?With the development of society and the progress of science and technology,it becomes more and more important to learn foreign languages,especially English,since En[英语科目]
Is it worthwhile for everyone to learn English?
With the development of society and the progress of science and technology,it becomes more and more important to learn foreign languages,especially English,since English is gradually becoming an international language.
Having a good mastery of English can give us more chance to find a good job,because the requirement of those well-known companies on their staff is:they have to have the ability to speak and write in English fluently.
English has been a global language as well as a shill should be handled by everyone.The materials in many fields are printed in English.If one who does not know English,he must have to wait other’s translation,and perhaps he won’t get the material he really want.Besides,most of the international research and communication are dealed in the language of English.Therefore,it is necessary to learn English .
So,in a word,it is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.
以上是我的修改稿,主要是第二段落修改的比较多.如果没有领会到你的原意,你也可以保留你的原创.有些句子还是过于用中式思维了.水平有限,不一定都对.FOR YOUR REFERENCE ONLY!
类似问题2：My Favorite SeasonThe other day,I talked about my friend about we favorite season.She said she favorite season is spring.However,I like autumn rather than spring.First of all,we can see the leaves become yellow,fall in the river.Second,in the autumn,[英语科目]
talk过去式是took后面没有about
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on the playground , high jump and long jump
What are you favorite season
懂了吗?
类似问题3：印度诗人泰戈尔说“生命当如灿烂的夏日之花,不凋不败,妖冶如火.” 中国诗人汪国真说：“生命可以没有灿烂,不能失去的是平凡.” 以上两句寓意深刻,引起了你怎样的思考?请结合自[语文科目]
写对生命的感悟.我摘过好词好句,关于这个生命的我摘了好几个大段,你要不要.要的话,留下你的QQ,QQ上发你.
类似问题4：给篇作文. [数学科目]
我们写过这个作文.
类似问题5：求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）Unforgettable dayChinese New year in a particular year,my family and I went shopping.We bought a lot of things,such as ice cream,popcorn,oranges,milk and bread.Mom gave me bought a lot of toys.After that w[英语科目]
an unforgettable day
Chinese New Year is a particular festival.I went shopping with my family.I bought a lot of things,such as ...My mom bought many toys for me.After that,we went to the zoo.I saw lots of animals.The monkeys are funny.The lions are terrible.The hamsters are very cute.We had/ate lunch under a tree.My dad told us some jokes.They were very interesting.It is a really memorable day.