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第一行doing 后加who are
第二行congratulation改为congratulations
him改为he
第三行after改为later
plan改为planned
第四行to prepare改为 preparing
movie加s
hard前加It's
has改为have
类似问题
类似问题1：英语改错 求老师帮忙37 [数学科目]
using---use 2.considered---consider 3.smart前加are 4.function--functions 5.play--playing 6.when--while 7.one--ones 8.serve--serves 自己做的. 还有2个找不出来了.不好意思哈
类似问题2：英语改错 [英语科目]
一行一个错
a-an
surprising- surprised
been-去掉
why- because
a lot- a lot of
these -those （but also 的also可以省略）
as well as- as well （也）
she a card- her a card
that - in that (因为）
so- so that （这样一来就可以继续…）
类似问题3：这篇我给一个国外老师的英语信,求改错Actually I don't wanna be a broadcaster because I maintain economy controls the development of society.but the reason of why I decided to chose broadcast is what I think the language ability or comm[英语科目]
Dear Mrs.McGill
Sorry to disturb you and please forgive for my poor English .
I'm Nica's cousin. My name is Leo Song( ALthough I appeared in March, actually I just love the combination of the name ),I'm twenty years old and I was born in Yantai in Shandong province.Yantai is a wonderful place although the economy does not develop very fast,this port city endows me with a peaceful and beautiful growing environment and it helps me to develop a good temper.A good temper doesn't mean that I'm an introversive person.I am good at dancing(poping) , singing and speaching in public ,etc. I'm a sophomore who major in broadcast in top-class arts of the college in Shandong.
呵呵,稍微改了下,希望能帮到你哦
类似问题4：求改错,自己写的老师英文推荐信I take great pleasure in recommending Mr. Ao Yang, my former student, for admission into your distinguished postgraduate program. I got to know him when he took my Operating System course.At first, Mr. Ao’[英语科目]
I take great pleasure in recommending Mr. Ao Yang, my former student, for admission into your distinguished postgraduate program.这句话帮你改成：I take pleasure in recommending my previous classmate,Mr Ao Yang, to join in your distinguished postgraduate program.
At first, Mr. Ao’s ordinary appearance did not catch much of my attention.这句话改成：At first, Mr Ao's ordinary apperance did not attract my attention. 吸引某人,不用catch,要用attract.
Later, I gradually found that he was intelligent, being able to raise the questions that other students could not reach. 这句话改成：Later, I gradually found that he was a delicated and intelligent person who could do the question that other could not deal with.解决问题,不用raise,用deal with或是cope with或是solve等.
Mr. Ao is an initiative and conscientious student, seeking self-improvement constantly. I found she indicated a great interest in Japanese language and literature.这里这改成：He is an delicated and obsorted student and he is always seeking self-improvement chance.
In China nowadays, computer and network technologies are relatively falling behind in comparison with the western countries.这句话语序改成：Nowdays, in comparison with wester countries,computer and networks technology in china are relatively falling behind.
I recommend him without any reservation. If you want to know more about him, please do not hesitate to contact with me. 这句话不好,改成：I am sorry that I recommend him without any reservation with you. Thanks for your attention and please contact with me if you would like to know more about him.
帮你调整下格式：
Dear***,
How is everything going in these days?
I take pleasure in recommending my previous classmate,Mr Ao Yang, to join in your distinguished postgraduate program.
I got to know him when he took my Operating System course.At first, Mr Ao's ordinary apperance did not attract my attention. Later, I gradually found that he was a delicated and intelligent person who could do the question that other could not deal with.Moreover, he often had personal talks with me about the cutting-edge technologies in the network field. His enthusiasm on the study of computer networks and breadth of the relevant knowledge gave me deep impressions.He is an delicated and obsorted student and he is always seeking self-improvement chance.He had personal talks with me several times, I found she indicated a great interest in Japanese language and literature.
Nowdays, in comparison with wester countries,computer and networks technology in china are relatively falling behind.So I personally very much support Mr. Lin to further his study and refine his skills in your institution. And I am sure that it will be tremendously helpful to his future career.I am sorry that I recommend him without any reservation with you. Thanks for your attention and please contact with me if you would like to know more about him.
Best Regards,
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总体上很行,只是有些句子表达不好,主要的几个帮你改过来了,语法也要多注意.格式我已经帮你调整好了.
希望对你有帮助!
类似问题5：英语改错,会的进! [英语科目]
C 把at改为in