...story of the Hawker and
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The feeling after reading
Before read The Omega Files,I know the effort of courage is very important!In this story,Hawker and Jude are brave,they are not afraid of danger,try to finish the task for organization.Eventually,though some riddle cannot be solved,but the process is very interesting.In the future,I want to learn more!
1名词所有格有错误
2句子有不通
3为了什么应该用for
4riddle复数不变
更正过的见上
类似问题
类似问题1：英语读后感修改企鹅英语简易读物里的凯伦与艺术家读后感修改时间很短错误很多A review on Karen and the ArtistThis book tell us a interesting story,It is about a girl and a boy.The girl called Karen.She is an airhostess [英语科目]
A review on Karen and the Artist
This book told us an interesting story about a girl and a boy.The girl was called Karen.She was an airhostess and she had been to many places.Once when she was in Rome,she went to a café ,and saw some beautiful pictures on the wall.She liked the pictures so much that she asked the barman who had draw them.And the barman told her that a man often went to his café to have foods and drinks.But he never payed him money.He only gave him some pictures .And at that time,that man just came in,and wanted to eat and drink .The barman didn't give him any food because he had no money,but only a picture .But Karen liked his pictures .And she realized that the man was very poor .So she decided to sell his pictures for him.But no one wanted to buy his pictures,because he was not famous.And Karen found a person selling pictures marked with a sentence“This is XXX’s picture”.He’s got an exhibition at the XXX in XXX.So Karen also sold the pictures in that way and got some money for the poor artist.
After reading it,I consider the society very unfair.No matter how telented you are,you can't succeed without fame.If one of Da Vinci's unknown works is signed with an unfamous artist,it may also be rejected.
大致改了下.话说那个XXX记得改掉哈.
类似问题2：在线等!帮我修改英文读后感!I like reading,THE SECRET GARDEN is one of my favourite books. When I finish reading this book,I was moved to tears. The short story tells the contect between human and green.Marry Lennox is the most important pe[英语科目]
Last week,I read the book .When I finish reading this book,I was moved to tears.The short story tells the contect between human and green.
Marry Lennox is the most important person in the story.I admire Mary very much ,because she has given Colin courage ,happiness and confidence .Having read this story ,I understood that carrying through firmly is victory no matter what we do.So we must work hard for our dream.
How much heart,haw much stage.If you belive yourself,the life will be very nice.
This seceret garden is also a magic mirrow,refracts everyone’s fate.Find the buried key,to open the enclosed garden,make it recover,make it grow.This is every life’s desire,it’s life’s truth,too.
Adults always ignore happiness,even disregard happiness.Childhood has gone forever,we should cherish it.
Blocking happiness won’t bring quiet,it just can make you decadent,and finish your life with pain and sad.
Cherish your life,and try your best to make it full of happiness!That’s what the book has told me.
类似问题3：汤姆索亚历险记的英文读后感修改[英语科目]
The book is a little difficult to read at first.Personally,it takes me a little while to get used to the 19th century dialect in the book.Other than referring to persons of African decent in derogatory terms (which I'm sure uses terms even young children already know),the book would be an enjoyable read for people of all ages.I highly recommend this book for anyone looking to feel young again,if just for a few hundred pages.
类似问题4：一篇英文读后感 Wonder Is On Your Hands ---Read Desert Mountain SeaWhat is difficult?Cross the big desert?Climb the high mountian?Or sail the sea alone?It may be difficult for common people.But three women show us everything is possible if you
Cross the big desert?----Crossing the big desert?
Climb the high mountian?--Climbing
Or sail the sea alone?---sailing
if you dare to dream with their actions-----if you dare to dream and take actions
In the book Desert mountain Sea,three women really moved me--中式英语
改为I was moved by the 3 women in the book Desert mountain Sea.
Ronbyn is one of the most bravest women that I have ever seen.----
最高级写错了,最勇敢the bravest
First,She could make a brave decision which is gongacross desert with camels----读着真别扭.gongacross是笔误么?
改为First,she made a brave decision to cross desert with camels.不需要从句WHICH了,太罗嗦.
finally,she succeeded after she tasted all the pain ---改为suffered all the pain.
And she saw the sea which is wide and deep as her dream---
Finally,she saw the wide and deep sea just like in her dream.就wide and deep没必要用定语从句了.
点评：总体来说,文笔通顺,语病不多,逻辑清晰.
但是,总是用中文思维造句,先想好一句中文再逐字翻译成英文的写作方法也算是初学者常见的情况,多读多写,就能改进.
另外,1234四点言之无物,有凑字数嫌疑.
我不是中学教师.
类似问题5：观后感用英语怎么说?
这个天天写
reflection