Forgiveness is what i lear
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Forgiveness is what i learned from my teacher ,【which 改为who】 has had a great influence on my growth.Two 【year 改为years】 ago,I,together with Tom,who 【were 改为 was】 regarded as the best beaksetball 【players 改为 player】 in my class,took part in the basketball game on behalf of our class【, with 改为句号,然后with大写W】 only 20 seconds 【leaving 改为 left 】,our team still 【takes 改为 took 】 the lead by two points.To our favor, 【ball 前面加 the】 was in Tom's 【hand 改为 hands】! Had 【I 改为 he】 passed it on time, we would have won.But Tom chose to break through. Suddenly,one player from the opposing team stole the ball,【but 改为 and 】 shot a three-pointer! After the match,we all demanded the teacher fire Tom.But our teacher told us to forgive 【about 删除】 him, saying forgiveness is 【a 删除】 good medicine for some diseases. After that,Tom did learn team work, 【Ur 改为 It】 was forgiveness rather than pity 【which 改为 that】 changed Tom.
错了15个地方,也许没有那么多,因为有可能是楼主打错字了.如不明白,请追问.
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year改为years，who改为which，takes改为took，hand改为hands，but改为and，去掉about，Ur改为It
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