要做英语作文，请大神帮我润色一下这篇英语文章，下面.
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Last Thursday,I went toEnglish corner with my friends firstly.What a wonderful experience and I wouldlike to share it with you next.
When I came into theclassroom,I saw a man who wears a black mask holding an opaque bag.Except forhim,there were also another two teachers.One was an enchanting woman,who wassitting on the table.The other was an old man with white bread who I saw insome charity activity.I said hello to him .when I sit down,surprisingly,themystery man took out some candies from his bag to me.I expressed gratitude tohim.
Firstly,we played aninteresting game.One of the foreign teachers showed us some cards with Englishwords on them.By his guidance,we stuck the cards on our forehead withoutknowing what it was written.Then they asked us to choose a partner freely andguessed the vocabulary with each other.I cooperated with the mystery teacherwho had dropped off the mask.I firstly asked him,is it food?He said no.Next,I asked whether it is in the classroom.He nodded kindly.The talkcontinued for a few minutes without any progress.Lastly,I had no choice butto ask for some hints .He reminded me that it is usual in American primaryschool,while it is absent in Chinese classroom.Finally,I gave up and seen itwhere Flag was written on it.
When the game was over,wechatted with foreign teachers in groups.They asked about our major.My majoris psychology.About psychology,we talked for a long time.He said seeingpsychologist in Americais common and expensive.It is a good idea if I intended to earn considerablemoney in America.But I explained that my English is not good enough to do it.He advisedhumorously why not find a foreign boyfriend which aroused laughter.Dreams werediscussed too.When asked what my dream is,I answered that my dream is earningenough money to travel around the world and when I am old,farming is also agood choice.We also talked about many other topics,such as our traditionalfestivals and traveling experience.
My first interculturalcommunication experience is so meaningful and I know more about the differencebetween America and China.In a world,the most essential is that I break out of shyness and show myself bravely.
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1、时态不统一：如果用过去式,就全文保持一致.但是你的文中,SO DO I这一句是一般语态,不是过去语态.当然我觉得这是一般描述,用一般语态就可以了2、单复数不一致：other students made a present这一句有单 复数方面...
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Nowadays, going study abroad is very popular. Many people want to the United States of America, because other people will envy them and they can get a certificate from abroad, which separate them from the students in domesticate.
But there are some disadvantage of going abroad. People should study for SAT, which is very difficult for the foreign students. People should study English very hard, and it is very demanding. Also going study abroad is very expensive, especially for the schools of top ten, although the schools abroad may have good conditions for study.
If i have chances, i will choose to study in domesticate. Because many of my friends will remain in domesticate, and it is easily to keep in touch with them. Also it is easier for me to get a good score in the entrance exam to the university.
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类似问题4：下面英语作文怎么写啊,根据提示写一篇60-80词的短文.要求文句通顺,无明显语法错误,意思完整.现在,越来越多的学校鼓励在校学生利用假期积极参与一些有益的社会实践活动,通过社会实践活[英语科目]
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Why Should We do Social Practice?
Nowadays, many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holiday, more and more students choose to be volunteers and do part-time jobs. It is obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in the college education. In stead of just reading books at home, college students can gain a lot of knowledge from social practice. Above all, students can also gain more opportunities to learn about the real world outside the campus. Moreover, in social practice activities, students can apply their knowledge to solve the practical problems and think about textbooks. So their hands-on abilities can be improved greatly. Considering above mentions, I think it is necessary for college students to take part in social practice in their spare time.
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