2012安徽高考英语作文答案-安徽2012高考作文-
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Good afternoon everyone,
Welcome to our school!High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though,I decide on science as my main subject of study.
The reason are as follows:
Firstly ,science graduates are in greater demand than arts in China.Secondly ,the science major may help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Thirdly, my parents wish me to study science at college ,because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student.But last not least,my physics teacher is my role moder, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reason that I finally made my choice.
Thanks!
类似问题
类似问题1：考场上写的2011安徽高考英语作文My Approach to Difficulties in LearningIt is a common phenomenon that all of us come accross certain sorts of difficulties while studying.There's certainly no need to be afraid of them and my tips on dealing[英语科目]
绝对属于第五档作文 即21-25分档
如果是我,我会给24分.即使是很严的老师,我想也不会低于21分.另外 还要考虑一下卷面书写问题.
类似问题2：我写的2010安徽高考英语作文安徽英语书面表达（满分25分）假如你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动,征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三考中,放弃其中一个并陈述理由.请你[英语科目]
看了一遍,觉得你的主要问题是语句不通顺 （不是说语法不对,就是这么用着有点别扭）.还有一个就是词汇还不够,在我看来用词比较简单,缺少可以为你加分的深度.这两个可能就是你得了18的原因；但我觉得你的整体结构啊什么的都是没问题的,我打的话20左右.下面在你的文里举几个例子.
“Nowadays, TV, cell, and Web are very common in our daily life. ” 如果改成 "Televisions, cell phones and the internet are all very widely used in our daily life." 就好些,名词前面不是复数应该加个 "the"
"masses of rubbish short messages" 应该是“junk message" 啦,不是"rubbish" 哦.
”there are a great deal of bad information“ 应该是 "there is", "information" 是不可数名词.还有,尽量避免用比较空泛的形容词,比如 "bad"/"good", 因为看起来觉得你词汇不够,影响打分者对你的印象.
”on some mobile phone websites“ - "some of the mobile phone websites"
"which is harmful to our mental health" - "mental development" 虽然你说的没错,但是听起来别扭.
"However, I believe that TV and Web are both useful" - "on the other hand...", 用"however"一般是在说同一件事物的不同方面时用的.
就这些,没考好也不要担心,继续努力学习吧.
类似问题3：2012湖北高考英语作文 求帮写一篇!请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文.You cannot choose what you are given,but you can choose how you make use of it.注意：①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语；②[英语科目]
One Possible Version
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.
三年前一次重要的考试我的失败了,（只能）成为一个普通的学校一名学生.寒酸的校园和破旧的教学设备令我失望,我发现老师很体贴并且有耐心.此外我喜欢班上友好的氛围.我决定充分利用它.我努力学习并且和老师同学相处得很好.每当我遇到困难他们总会帮助我.很快,我成为了班里的尖子生,这大大的增强了我的自信和激情.
我的经历告诉我并不是给了你什么你你就能充分利用它,决定权在于你自己.